2012년 1월 15일 일요일

HAUNTED DORMITORY #2

My name is Jane. From now on, I'll tell you the story of my own experience.


  It was a sunny day. I was going to the school. There were many flowers , grasses, and trees because spring is starting. When I was stepping on green grass, I felt something. Something which is very thick and very heavy was stepped. I looked that thing. It was a diary. I picked up and brought that to my school. In the recess, I went to my secret place, where nobody knows. I sat there and started to read the diary.


  That diary's owner was one of the KMLA student. She also worked for P.A. in GLPS camp. I could know what is KMLA and GLPS camp because it's very famous and well known. Also I am planning to participate in GLPS camp too. I saw some journals. First page was about her feelings toward participating GLPS camp by P.A. She wrote things that she is very nervous and also happy to do this. Next one was about her life in GLPS camp. She wrote that she is very glad to participate this camp and that it would be a good experience. When I saw next page, I felt spooky and scary.


  It was about dormitory life. First three paragraph was quite good. But the third paragraph was about.  HAUNTED DORMITORY!! She included things that she heard from other P.A.s and students. It was written like this ; It was a dark stormy night. Three girls were in the KMLA dormitory. They were in the bed trying to go to sleep. They were very tired. They had to go to second period study time. It was very quiet and dark night.
SUDDENLY! The sound came at the door.
One girl slowly walked toward the door, thinking it was a P.A. Then, another girl joined her, a bit scared. P.A.s usually just come in without knocking. When the two girls opened the door, there was nobody standing in the door. When they came back, one girl who was left behind called them
"WHERE ARE YOU! I'M SCARED!!" the two girls said "We are COMING! Nobody was there strange
Let's sleep at one bed. It's little scary!" The other girls agreed and gathered in to one bed. It was little too small,  but at least they were together. And then...... There was aknocking sound at the door again.
But they were too scared to go down and check it. They just trembled on the bed. Then aspooky moaning sound came from the door. Then, there was a scrathing sound too. They were really! scared this time. They looked around. NOBODY AGAIN! Then anothere sound came. One girl started to scream "Aah!! I HEAR IT! IT'S NEAR US! HELP!" But nobody came. Then she screamed again!
"HELP! HELP! SOMETHINGS PULLING ME DOWN! AAH!" Then, she saw a skull face. It was looking straightly toward the girls. Then,    the skull yelled. "Do you remember me? Do you know who I am?" The the skull disapeared. Girls trembled with fears and cried. Later, a white thing, which looked like curtains but almost trasparent moved infront of girls. The girls screamed again. They sticked each other and they couldn't even scream because of fear. They were surrendered by ghosts. Then, the biggest and spookiest ghost came close to the girls. THEN! He took one girl and disapeared. The girls' head was fulled with fears. Then the rest of the ghosts disapeared too. Next day, that KMLA dormitory room was called
THE HAUNTED DORMITORY.
This memory is still in the other two girls.

-The End-

I felt very spooky and terrible. I didn't even knew these things will happen in KMLA. But I determined to go to KMLA by participating in GLPS camp. 

  Next summer, I really participated. 2 weeks passed but nothing happened. At day 18, some white and transparent thing passed through my body. I don't know if it's sure. I was filled with fear, that I couldn't even speak or scream. Suddenly, one thought popped off in my head. Is this a real ghost who been attacked by ghosts? Then the ghost spoke. 
" I'm one of the participants of the GLPS camp. Do you know my story?"
Then I nodded to show that I know her. Then she said; " This KMLA is haunted. This place is dangerous. Please go out. I don't want you to be like me. I beg to you. "Then, I felt scary. I determined to get out of this KMLA. Next day, I called my mom, and I asked her that could I go home right now. My mom didn't asked any thing to me and just said "YES"So I quickly packed my things and went home. This is my terrible experience.


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  1. This is truly metafiction! Great job. What a fun read. Scary and funny and well structured! Perfect!

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